Wednesday, October 5, 2011

Response

For the first group, HAU's group. The language is simple, it is easy to read. And for the content, they give some example for cancers, cells and tumor. In the society part, they post the situation of the people in 19's. And it is differnt from us.
For wu's group, they have many facts and informations.
For marina's group, they use point form to state all the informations. I think it is more clear for the reader.
For Aye' group, they do not have many information, but it still clear.
For Tony's group, they have enough information and it is clear.
Lastly, for the next post of our group, we can add more informations and examples to support our view and we can use point form, so the readers can read more clearly. and we need to make sure that all the words spell correctly and there are no grammar mistakes. And make sure all the informations are correct so we will not confuse the readers.

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